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Monday, May 14, 2012

Getting over Him!


She sat alone in the shadows of the setting sun. The time of sunset was her favourite part of the day. For reasons unknown the sun always calmed her down and compelled her to think deep. Life,people,relations,complications. The thoughts she ignored all day along,somehow crept the surface then. She looked at the couples around her,their glowing glittering faces. The overflow of emotions of love. The phase when everything just seems to be alright.
              She felt lonely,sad and depressed. She was insanely jealous of them. The holding hands,the stupid fights,the cuddly make up. Ah! she missed it. She missed  him. Busy in the days work she mastered keeping him out of her mind. But the evenings got really heavy. He never seemed to leave her thoughts. The cheesy movies,the couples she saw on bikes,movies,gardens,the stories of her girlfriends and their partners,the intense bollywood love scenes. Every single thing made way for his thoughts. No matter how much she tried there was a part of her that just couldn't be convinced its over.
            She had stopped listening to songs,she had stopped watching romantic flicks,she had stopped calling her friends. Yet nothing seemed to work out. She felt secured in his arms,even his good night message made things straight. And now nothing remained,just the empty heart trying to hold on to the last bits of the memories they had made.
            He saw her sitting alone,walked upto her. Looking at her tears,he asked 'missing him again?'. She squeaked a yes. "Come here" he said hugging her "Don't worry. I will make you get over him."              
             




23 comments:

  1. Took my thoughts and gave them words.

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  2. Awwww!
    I loved the way you ended it. BEAUTIFUL!
    <3 x

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    1. I loved the ending as well ☺

      "Good things fall apart, so better things can fall together" ☺ (Quoted from an amazing blogger)

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  4. :-) You should totally write love stories.You would make a good writer..

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  5. Cute and quick! The sunsets set the mood of the narrative.

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  6. Short and Sweet - just like a blog post ought to be!

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  7. Short, sweet, elegant and lovely :)

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