My Encouragement!!

Thursday, July 26, 2012

Four lines!

It didn't make any sense at first
but now all the pieces join together
What i thought wasn't love
has become my soul forever....

Captivated,destroyed and spoiled
i sunk into your closed embrace
with a kiss that lasted a hundred years
with the rush the heart didn't explain..

If its lust to make me this crazy
i'd want nothing more...
If' its love to make me weak at knees
i'd promise to love till my lips go sore!


41 comments:

  1. Four Lines - packed with passion.
    Superbly written.

    One suggestion - avoid pictures as they distract the reader from your beautiful writing

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    1. :) :) :) thank you!! will take your advice.. i like kinda putting pictures though

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    2. +1 for Vikram, could not agree more!
      Awesome words! Very well written. Congratulations!

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  2. Damm it, this made me Blush! Haha..
    Awesome poem :) Very nicely written.

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  3. This is so beautiful... I haven't read someone write about love and lust in such simple words :)

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  4. Hi Sneha.. I would like to present you with this sweet gift..you deserve it :)

    Please go to the link to find it
    http://canvascribbles.blogspot.in/2012/07/my-first-blog-award-leibster-award.html

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    1. omg omg!!! thank you!!!!!!!! :) :) :) :)

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    2. Hi Sneha, You are most welcome...well you can save the pic on your desktop, and on your blog settings just go to "add a pic" (via add gadgets) and upload where ever u want on your blog.. and do not forget to follow the simple rules associated with it which you might have read at my link.. (just to keep the sanctity of this award ..;p)

      I hope this helps you out...

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    3. yes neha.. got it!!! thank you so much! you just made my day!!

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  5. that was really nice.. four words :D

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  6. Really passionate and wonderful !!!

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    1. hey your first comment for me!! thabk you so much!! welcome to my blog!

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  8. Those last four lines sum it up.
    Good job, Sneha :)

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  9. for lines of compassion .....grt poetry :)

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  10. I am reading your poetry for the first time-it is beautiful!!!!

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    1. welcum indu.. hope u like the other posts too!:)

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  11. Stunning!!

    It didn't make any sense at first
    but now all the dots are connected.
    What i thought was just a piece of scribbling
    is turned out to be a piece of mastery.

    Nice work doc! :) :)

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    1. hahaha!! well there is so much of taunts and compliments so subtly mixed there, i cant recognize which is which!! :
      nyways thanks a lot :)

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    2. lol.. then I certainly messed it up.. M not a poet like you.. I can barely write.. :D

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    3. hahahah!! naa u made a good version of my first four lines!! :) :)

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  12. simply awesome...loved the last four lines...so true

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