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Thursday, February 21, 2013

Not once I said Be Mine

Not once i looked back on him
Not once i tried to know how he'd be doing
Not once i wished him a last good bye
Not once i gave him a thoughtful smile...

Not once did i try to hear him out
Not once did i let out my anger and shout
Not once i said 'stay i need you now'
Not once i confessed i loved him somehow.

Not once did i reply his mail
Not once did i explain my hurting tale
Not once i held on to those tears
Not once i confronted him with my fears.

I let him go
I helped him disappear
I watched him be someone else's shine
and i stood by holding on to my aching heart
to fault over someone who from
beginning was never mine...

47 comments:

  1. Its just morning for me and read it, feels really touching. Nicely done :)

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  2. Hurting...it's very pining to read a poetry like this...

    "not once did a person feel how he/she would live in this world without his/her beloved...if they did they would have never let them go away"

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  3. Superbly written - you write from the heart.
    Keep penning such wonderful emotional pieces.
    Vikram Karve
    Academic and Creative Writing Journal Vikram Karve


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    1. thats so beautifully written! :) will look forward for more such writings

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  4. Heart-wrenching. Inexplicable pathos in your poems touch a chord in my heart.

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  5. It reminds me of the favourite quote,"I you love someone set him free, if he comes he is yours, if he doesn't he never was!"

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  6. Wow... i liked the flow ! it was well executed !

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  7. Oh this is so very disturbing--your thoughts expressed so eloquently,they touch the heart.

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    1. am sorry if its disturbing.. but thank you :)

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  8. koi na jaane kya wo rahas hai... u flow even if he is there either ways... and thats the magic of this concept called LOVE...

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  9. You have captured the essence of many one-sided love stories.

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  10. Freaks Sneha... You had me hooked from the very first line... :)

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  11. Simply written and effective in expression of her love towards him. :)

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  12. If you never said be yours he won't be yours. That too after avoiding him. He has tried his best. So its a natural thing to happen. No meaning in crying over it.

    No hard feelings intended. An open opinion.

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    1. no hard feelings taken.. its your opinion.. i respect it :)

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    2. but read the last line.. from beginning he wasn't mine.. no use telling someone you love them when they are already someone else's

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