My Encouragement!!

Monday, May 6, 2013

He said I promised her a life.

He said 'I have to be with her.
If i don't go, she might not
keep faith in anyone again'.

He said 'I need to hold her hand
If i don't, she might make herself so strong
to not let anyone be close again'.

He said 'I made her fall in love with me.
If i undid that, she won't
believe in fairy tales having a forever'.

He said 'I need to stand by her.
If today i back out, she won't
even look at me not today not ever'.

He said 'I know she can make it on her own.
I know she is that strong.
but i want to be there to catch if she falls.

He said 'I promised her a Life.
I promised her Me.
If i don't stay when she needs me the most
Tell me, What kind of  a Man i be?






23 comments:

  1. indeed .. love means commitment,responsibility and onus ... amazing lines Sneha !!

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  2. Nice choice of words...Stay blessed..!!

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  4. This is one beautiful piece of poetry!! Loved it!

    Hugs
    Kriti

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  5. this one I liked Sneha! It comprises of pain, sorrow and responsibility and commitment too :)

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  6. This is superb...i like the wordings and this poem is simply awesome...!!!

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  7. Your poems are amazing...I like them much...
    Here's an award for you for your writings as such!!!

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    1. thank you so much kriti for the blog award!

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  8. nice one...true intense feelings

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